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We used to be strangers,
Then we became friends.
Now we are Besties,
Now we know, our friendship would never end.

We took the time to know each other,
More than we ever thought we could.
We learned to understand our thoughts,
Learned to hold on for all the bad and good.

We did get mad at times.
And at times, we did fight.
But those moments ended soon enough,
Making the good memories shine bright.

Even when we said something else,
We learned to know what we mean.
The knowledge that we have each other,
Gave us the strength to fight the unseen.

We learned to share our secrets,
Together, learned to laugh n cry.
Talking our heart

You and Me

There are times..
Times that come too often these days
When the distance seems too much
Too much to cover only with thoughts
So much that even in a crowd of 'known's
I keep looking for your eyes..
Remembering how they'd light up
When they see me.
But knowing you are too far away,
I still feel you around.
Every time I look around, I see..
You teasing me,
About the silliest things
And the way I try to get angry,
Even though, in my heart, I just smile.
Knowing you are the only one
Who understands me this much..
It's something I don't want to explain..
Something that no one else would possibly believe.
And the bond that we call

Complicated Life

Complicated life, complicated ways..
Everyday we fight just for another day..
We live for the future..
We cling to the past..
And we never enjoy the present..
As long as it lasts.
We fall for those who'd never be ours..
And we spend sad and lonely hours.
We forget who love us,
We forget who really cares,
And run behind illusions
And all we find is tears.
We take a moment to judge others
But never admit that we're wrong
And we hurt others just to show
That we're the ones who are strong.
Complicated life, complicated ways,
But it's us who make it more complicated
With every passing day.

Just a DreamI see you standing in front of me
With a smiling face
And your eyes trying to talk
In a very special way.
I stare at you.. Our eyes locked
My mind trying to guess why are you here
A strange feeling of happiness
I feel a chill of fear.
You come closer and take my hand
Whisper in my ears 'Do you understand?
That I don't want a day without you'
My heart skips a beat
I try to tell you I feel the same
But I wake up and see
It has all been just a dream.

A Day of My OwnIf I could have a day of my own..
I'd start it with a morning sun..
Singing birds and colourful flowers..
A day filled with happy hours..
Cloudy sky as the day goes by..
A little rain and a rainbow high..
Taking time from their busy life..
People would look up at the sky..
Food for all of their choice..
The ones on road, a happy voyage..
Home for those who have no place..
No more tears.. just smiling face.
And those who are far away 'n alone..
Would be on their journey back home..
A clear blue sky with cotton clouds..
That takes away all our doubts..
And as the Sun goes down..
It'd take away all the frowns..
A happy dinner w

Story of a Star

This is the story of a star. A star who had her own universe, small yet beautiful. She was the centre of it and she was happy. But fate had some other plans.
One day, she saw a light so bright that it almost blinded her.. That was the day when a new star came around. The star was so strong and so beautiful that all she wanted was to follow him. Without a doubt, she scattered her universe and went along with him, made his universe her own. She was happy and everything was almost perfect.
But the 'almost' made all the difference. Slowly she realized what she had done.. She understood that she was about to lose hersel

World of MeI wish like a bird I could fly,
Free to go where I want to be,
Away from the crowd, up in the sky,
I wish there was a world of me! ♥

Stone-Heart

Today I walked in the rain,
Just to see if I could forget the pain for a while.
But all I could think about was why
Why is it so hard for me to smile
To Smile at the miseries of life
To smile at the stranger passing by
To smile at the beauty I see
When I look up at the clear blue sky
Why is it that every time I pause
I feel that you'd never be mine
And although I say that I'm doing okay
In my heart I know nothing is fine.
If love had to be so painful,
I wonder why couldn't I have a stone-heart..
It would have been so much better not to fall in love,
Than to see my world falling apart.

BrokenThe laughter of yesterday is gone..
And I dunn wanna see the next dawn..
Cause I'm broken..
Day by day.. Piece by piece..
And everybody just breaks me into more n more pieces..
There's no one to tell me that it's gonna be okay..
No one to tell me that they love me..
And the fake smile around me makes me feel sick..
And I dunno where to run away..
I just dunn wanna see one more such day!

Lost In The CrowdI have always been lost in the crowd..
The one who is noticed only when alone..
And as soon as others come by..
Every trace of me is gone.

A Dream

Do you ever try to analyze your dream? Try to remember what actually you see? I do that all the time. But mostly I remember nothing. But there's this one dream that I often see.. That I always remember.. It feels more real than just a dream..

An empty beach.. A calm blue sea.. I am sitting on the sand..with my love beside me..my head on his shoulder..we're whispering to each other.. As the setting sun paints the horizon red.. Mesmerized by the beauty of the sunset.. I look into his eyes and see myself.. And I find peace.. The kind of peace I have been looking for all my life long.. And then we stand up as the Sun hides himself in the se

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My Wish For You

by ~aeebee, Aug 13, 2011, 11:26:09 AM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Concrete Poetry

A sunny day to brighten up your mood
A starry sky to shine on you
Soft breezes in the summer time
Are the things I wish for you.

Rainbows after the rain
Strength when you are in pain
Sad moments very few
Are the things I wish for you.

Comfort in difficult time
Beauty to make your heart shine
Courage to face what's true
Are the things I wish for you.

Faith to make you believe
Confidence in everything you do
And friends to chase away your blue
Are the things I wish for you.

Happiness to your heart's content
Crazy times to make you laugh.
A long life to enjoy every moment
And to top it off, true love.

All these and many more
Happy times and success galore
Shining future and happy rendezvous
Are the things I wish for you.

My Wish For Youby ~aeebee

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Concrete Poetry

I wrote it as a Birthday Gift but never posted it here.

P.S. I Do NOT own the Image. Only the poetry is mine.

I Just have two questions about this poem:

1. Does the rhyming sound good everywhere?
2. Is there any suggestion to make it a better piece?

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~SilverMist3 Nov 11, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

#1. Does the rhyming sound good everywhere?

Well, yes. Although in some areas the rhyme seems a bit forced, which can effect the flow. I would suggest dropping extra syllables.
For example, when you said "Shining future and happy rendezvous" you could leave out "and" and put a comma there instead.

#2. Is there any suggestion to make it a better piece?

Like I said, drop extra syllables. But other than that, no I can't think of anything.

Overall, this is a wonderful piece, and I'm sure it made a wonderful birthday gift for whomever you wrote this...
I really do like this, its nice and relaxed, and has a serene feel to it. Its like something straight out of a poetry book! :3
Very well done.

~Clevina Nov 2, 2011 Writer

What a sweet poem!

Hmm...for the most part the rhyming's fine, but at times it sounds a bit forced. Another thing that would improve the poem would be to keep a constant meter so that there is a rhythm to the poem, because right now the rhythm is pretty irregular, which breaks the flow of the poem.